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UPDATE(July 2012): This chapter has been completely revamped. This is the definitive polished version of it.

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NUMBER OF PAGES: 21.

This is the first Donatello centric chapter. It might not seem that way, but Donatello is one of the most important characters in MNTGaiden. All the main turtles are important, actually.

All official TMNT characters are (c) Mirage Studios, Viacom and Nickelodeon

Previous chapter (CHP 5): [link]
Next chapter (CHP 7): [link]
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uomie Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist
Uuh poor Carole.... she misses her brother so much.

and Donatello I'm glad you have made yourself controlled. :phew:
in this kind of situation I fell pity for both Carole and Donnie.... :hmm:
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Ecanusiofiel Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Student General Artist
omg Donnie's completely lost it.

Also I totally just stumbled on this, loving it so far. Although I am curious how Leo has changed after so much time; starting to wonder if he's dead. I shall continue reading.
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BFire92 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh shit!
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srmthfgandtmntgirl Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
Donnie you really need to get outside more. You're freaking everybody out scared.... "the 2nd" 
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Allison1y Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Is it wrong that I love Donnie's insane side? O.o
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Smurf-Ninja-Kick Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Geez Donnie, 'human shield' of a little girl... no way...
Leo didn't take his reality; he forced everything on himself because he saw nothing before his awakening to Splinter's death, which, he only saw the end of.
Little Carole! BREATH!

Still love this!:happybounce: 
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crazydemon007 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
donnie is becoming really creepy, he scarying me.
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:iconcodeyellow07:
Codeyellow07 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
Donnie's scaring me....
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ToughSunshine32 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist
Uh... Is Donnie feeling okay? :icondotdotplz:
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rocketout1016 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Carole reminds me of my 4-year old cousin named Kimberly!
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RaphaelMyLove Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
I just want to yell at Don sooooobad!!!
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Mumume Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Uh....Is Donny gonna go mad scientist ape shit on us? He makes me feel like he's going to try an reanimate splinter or something....Or try and turn people into mutants or something... I don't know but I think he's lost it. 0.0 I mean, the fact that he even considered killing that girl is like...so crazy.

I like crazy Donny. Crazy just...just feels right with him.
Lol- is that weird? Lololol
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tjoeksie Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
MY GOD DONNIE!!! WHAT HAPPEND TO YOU!!!!! :(
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KyleWhisper4 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
Oh Donnie....Splinter would be ashamed of you
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Sonicstar101 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
You could have redraw the pictures that we're already there the same way the we're back in 2005
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:iconbellorel:
bellorel Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
dude. that was hardcore.
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LiyuConberma Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Student General Artist
I wanna know how do you put the entire chapter onto DA?
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Sonicstar101 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
Please don't make donnatello put Carole in anymore danger.
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NinjaTertel Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love the new revamps on old chapters! I can really see the difference between the old ones.!! :clap:

BTW, on page 3, the last panel Donnie said "I have not choice", should it be "I have no choice"? :D
page 5 too, first panel, "loose them"...
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anime1999 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome
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Mcgrnwlf Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
been awhile since I've seen this one. still invokes the same feelings too.
carol's Kawaii field seems rather low for donnie to be able to grab her like that.
still I always liked this chapter because it really shows donnies mental struggle
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CarnalClown Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wtg!! the new panels look sweet! :)
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Falljoydelux Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Carol is sooooo CUTE!!! And Donnie expressing care for her, even below his own subconcious, made me go :iconeeeeeplz:
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Kingdom2469 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Wow, it actually looks really good being revamped. I really like how you add the side conversation between the two cops and how the police girl seem confidence.
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Tigerfog Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks. The old version with the police officers confronting Donatello didn't sense at all. Even if it were in the most absurb anime-cartoon.
After all, the police officer (Eva) was SO incomptent in the old version that she shouldn't handle a gun in the first place, let alone be a police officer.
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Sonicstar101 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
If you are redrawing the comic, please don't throw away the old pages. I want to still see them.
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Tigerfog Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Sorry, they're gone from my site and from here. :P
I'm pretty sure someone has them saved somewhere on their PC, I'd prefer if people just stuck to this revamped version. It makes a lot more sense. :)
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Sonicstar101 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
Can I read it from obscure zodiac?
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princessanike Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
well, take your time tigerfog, okay!!!
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princessanike Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
who is the smartest one in group between, carole, shadow, davianna and renior, when he was angustus?, what is davianna's parents names and when they work at? and i'm talking about her adopted ones?
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princessanike Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012
tigerfog, when are you going to updated chapter 6 and 7???
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:icontigerfog:
Tigerfog Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Whenever I have time. Reworking them is not as easy as it seems. :P
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jadecapricorn Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no idea whats going on just randomly clicked on a chapter but im almost in tears...
so good!
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GingaGirl86 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
Donny's gone insane! D:
Hmm, very nive twist! I like how the genius turned mad, kind like a mad scientist!
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:iconultdragon:
Ultdragon Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
This chapter may need reworking for consistency.
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:icontigerfog:
Tigerfog Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
There's nothing inconsistent with this chapter...
The only things that might need some modification are the page format, the use of screentones and a better written dialogue.
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Ultdragon Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
Ah,I think I picked a wrong English word...page format,that's what I meant...
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FoxKid1302 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If the scene of your father got killed right before your very eyes doesn't drive you from a gentle, kind turtle to a twisted, wrecked mind, I don't know what does...
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PhantomHourglass Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011
Awesome!!!
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Gallerica Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
True story. I think. :)
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:iconcolend:
Colend Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student
DON!!!DONNIE!!!
This is the part when Donnie start showing his dark side...*sob*

While I was reading chapter 18...I was shocked...
"NO!!!DON!!!DON'T!!!"...*sob sob*
I like Carole cause she is so kind and cute~
Hope she wouldn't get killed by Don...She is such an angel! (Why do I have a feeling that Don will like her too? )
"GO CAROLE! BRING THE KIND DON BACK!!!" (Mistry vioce: Just ingnore her. She's out of her mind.)
(我爱Donnie!我想抱抱Donnie!……虽然我知道会被杀OTZ……)


I REALLY WANT A HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!!!
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:icontigerfog:
Tigerfog Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Ah... I can't say anything... It's a SURPRISE!
I have already planned the ending...
Carole is supposed to be the naive voice of the whole cast of characters. She will always be nice to Donnie, that's all I can tell you for now. :)
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Colend Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student
我!爱!MNTG!!!
我!爱!LDRM!!!
这部漫画好虐但是真的太好看了啊啊无法控制LeoDonnieRaphMikey啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊……

(Sorry, I just love this comic sooooooooooooooooooo much...)
(The story is hurting my heart...but...just couldn't...stop reading...and, LOVE IT!)

Can't wait to see chapter 22
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Tigerfog Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
It doesn't just hurt for those guys, don't worry.
If there's hurt, there's healing as well. I'm just not there yet for Donatello and Leo... but you saw how Raph and Mikey's lives went from bad to good, right?
Things have to get worse before they get better.
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:iconcolend:
Colend Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student
Yeh............................
It's good to see R&M become happy again...*hug*

(Now I'm worry about that poor policeman.)
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:icontigerfog:
Tigerfog Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
It's all about cause-and-effect.
The policeman that first appeared in CHP6 ("Tony") served in purpose in the storyline in CHP19 and it has an impact on the development of many characters.
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:iconcolend:
Colend Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student
yeh...I see...
……DONDONDONDONDONDONDONDONDON……………………………………(Mystery voice: *sigh* She's out of her mind again...)
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burt1712 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Filmographer
oh babay!!!! i cant wait to read! loading.. loading.........
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:icontigerfog:
Tigerfog Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Is it even working? Or is it loading indefinitely?
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:iconburt1712:
burt1712 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Filmographer
naw... were good, im just impatient, i already read it a long time ago, just needed a refresher. your work is really good btw, but i will never look at don the same way twice!
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