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17 years after the prologue, the main story starts.
All the turtles are 34 years old, grew up apart and changed, mostly for the worse.
Basically, they are no longer teens, so they are MNTs. ;)

In this first chapter, I throw in Renoir, a new turtle.
It was a risky move since going beyond the original 4 turtles is kind of controversial, but in retrospective, I think I did my job well: he's not too Mary-Sue-ish.

Instead of making him the subject of unconditional positive attention from the old TMNT and giving him all the skills he needs to be a competent and capable character, I did the complete opposite.
Renoir is a womanizer, a big whiner, a self-centered narcissistic teen, a worthless and lousy fighter (like most of us non-ninjas, lol) and most importantly, he doesn't want to be with the old TMNT at all.
And the old TMNTs? They don't care about him as much as they care about their own problems and their conflicts between each other (the one person who cares about Renoir doesn't have good intentions).

As for the girls you see at the beginning of the chapters, one is Shadow Jones, who already exists in the official Mirage comics, and Davianna Wallace, an OC Japanese girl adopted by a couple from New York.
Shadow fights crime just like her father.
As for Davianna... well, she'll be trouble in later chapters. Damsel in distress. :\

This chapter was drawn back in 2004-2005, but I retouched it and added screentones last year to make it look prettier. :)

Previous chapter (Prologue): [link]
Next chapter (CHP 2):[link]
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Horses2468 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
Why can't I see any off our work when I click on it?!?!?:(
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Sonova112 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
Poor poor August/Renoir
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Dominique-Lefalle Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Oh God, Raph.  LoL
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AngelDonSplinterson Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love this!!!
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nightthevampire Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
omg Donnie. SCIENCE IS POWER! XD
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srmthfgandtmntgirl Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
:happy: :happy:  Renoir and Raph makes me laugh!
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Desycandy Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
If the prologue made ​​me cryWaaaah!Waaaah! , the following is doing me die laughing.:happybounce: :squee: LOL - Smiley Eyes OMG MOAR POEMS! 
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Pocchama11 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh, I read up to chapter 22 and it's so flipping awesome :squee: 
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mintpower Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Ikr!!!
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rocketout1016 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
This comic just gave me an idea for another comic and as soon as we get a scanner you'll see a lot of comics from me
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